I Raised the Demon Queen (Now She Won't Leave Me Alone)-Chapter 58 : The Escape

"You want us to what?"

Elias blinked at the general, who stood like an armored statue in the corner of their small cottage's kitchen. Behind him, the stove hissed quietly where Rhea's latest attempt at tea had boiled over. Again.

The general's expression was the same as always: grim, unreadable, and vaguely judgmental—as if he'd walked in on Elias folding his underwear wrong and never quite recovered.

"I have secured a temporary corridor," the general said. "It will remain open for ninety-three minutes. After that, it will collapse, possibly catastrophically."

Elias ran a hand through his hair. "You're saying we need to run—through some secret war tunnel you just happen to have—and reach the demon ruins before the church or the town figures out where we've gone?"

"That is correct."

"And if we don't?"

"You are apprehended and possibly dissected."

"Great," Elias muttered. "Just your average Thursday."

Rhea sat at the table, legs swinging. She looked calm—but the kind of calm that could snap like a violin string.

"Will the ruins... call to me?" she asked softly.

The general paused. "Possibly. But more importantly, they are hidden. Deep enough that the church will not risk open pursuit."

Elias leaned back. "Right. Super comforting. And these ruins won't kill us, right?"

"They probably won't."

"That is not reassuring."

It took them less than two hours to pack.

Elias stuffed clothes, potions, his half-finished fantasy novel manuscript, and two jars of suspicious jam into a single overstuffed backpack. Rhea, ever efficient, packed a small satchel with one shirt, four pairs of socks, and her new stuffed cat (which she had silently named "Doom").

The general carried no luggage.

Apparently, ancient ghost-warrior types didn't need deodorant or emergency toilet paper.

Outside, the town was strangely quiet.

The kind of quiet that made your skin itch.

Rhea stood near the door, her small hands curled into fists at her side. She didn't speak, didn't cry. But her shoulders were tense.

"You ready, kid?" Elias asked, kneeling beside her.

She nodded. "...I'm scared."

He smiled. "Me too. But if we do it together, I think we'll be okay."

"You always say that."

"Because it's always true."

She managed the smallest of smiles.

"Okay," she whispered. "Let's run."

They slipped through the side streets like ghosts.

The general led the way, his black cloak blending with the shadows. Despite his hulking frame, he moved like water, somehow avoiding every creaky board and nosy cat. Elias tried to copy him, but—

CLANG

"Sorry!" Elias hissed, kicking over a barrel. "Why is this town made of noise?"

They ducked into an alley. Rhea giggled softly into her sleeve.

"Seriously," Elias whispered, "why do barrels even exist? Are they for ambiance? Do people actually store fish in them anymore?"

"You tripped over it last week, too," Rhea added helpfully.

"I'm aware."

The general didn't comment.

The entrance to the corridor was, shockingly, behind the town's public latrine.

Elias stared at it.

"You're joking."

"I am not," the general said.

"You hid an escape tunnel to the demon ruins behind the outhouse."

"It was the least likely place to be searched."

"I mean—I guess that's true, but I feel like I've lost a little dignity just standing here."

"You had dignity?"

Elias glanced at Rhea. "Okay, rude."

She shrugged. "You said I should be honest."

Touché.

The "corridor" was not, strictly speaking, a tunnel. freewebnøvel.com

It was more like a shimmering crack in space.

A tear in the fabric of the world, hovering in the air like a silver wound. Beyond it, swirling darkness. Occasionally, Elias could swear he heard whispers. Or a kazoo. It was hard to tell.

"Just step through?" he asked.

The general nodded. "Step quickly."

"Right." Elias took a deep breath. "Ladies first."

Rhea kicked him in the shin, then stepped through the portal.

Elias followed, limping slightly.

The sensation was like walking through jelly made of static electricity and secrets.

And then—they were gone.

The corridor was... weird.

There was no floor.

No sky.

Just endless floating islands of broken stone, suspended in a purple mist. Gravity worked inconsistently. Sometimes sideways. Sometimes not at all.

Elias clung to the general's cloak like a frightened barnacle.

"Why does this place exist?"

"It was formed during the collapse of the Demon Throne," the general said calmly. "Reality folded to seal the old world away."

"Folded?! Like laundry?!"

"Poorly folded."

"GREAT."

Rhea, to Elias's utter bafflement, was doing cartwheels off floating stones, giggling.

"It tickles!" she said, hair flying.

"She's enjoying this," Elias muttered.

"She is connected to this realm," the general said. "It responds to her presence."

"So the nightmare gravity realm likes her."

"Yes."

"Fantastic."

They traveled like that for what felt like hours.

Occasionally, a monster would appear.

Shadow-things with too many limbs, or drifting masks that whispered in reverse.

Every time they drew close, the general would look at them—and they'd vanish.

Rhea asked once, "Why do they listen to you?"

"I was the Queen's Sword," he said.

"Her sword?"

He nodded once.

Elias muttered, "That explains so much and yet raises so many more questions."

Near the end of the corridor, the floating islands gave way to solid ground again.

A jagged stone platform rose up—like a staircase carved from the bones of a mountain. Beyond it, a colossal gate shimmered with old magic. Runes pulsed along its surface, deep red and ancient.

"The Ruins of Namarok," the general said quietly.

Rhea stared at it. "...It's calling."

Elias looked at her. "You okay?"

"I think... I remember this place. From before."

Her eyes darkened slightly. But not dangerously.

Just with the weight of memory.

"I was crowned here," she whispered. "In a storm of fire and blood. And now I'm coming back with my pajama shirt and a cookie in my bag."

Elias squeezed her hand.

"I think that's progress."

As they stepped toward the gate, it opened on its own—slow, grinding stone that echoed across the canyon.

Inside: darkness.

But it was warm.

Strangely, impossibly warm.

Rhea looked up at Elias.

He smiled nervously. "Well, at least it's not raining."

"...You're scared again."

"Terrified."

"Me too."

They stood together for a moment at the threshold.

Then she said, "I'm glad you're here."

Elias ruffled her hair. "I'm not going anywhere, Rhea. Demon ruins or not."

They stepped into the darkness together.

And the gate closed behind them.

To be continued...