Its pretty reppetive, good at first, then falls off
luck
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This story had potential, but the main character is just way too overpowered and lucky. No matter what happens, they never struggle, never lose, and everything always works out perfectly for them. It’s like the story is afraid to let anything go wrong.
At first, it might seem cool that the main character is lucky, but after a while, it gets boring. There’s no real tension or excitement because you already know they’ll win. It feels less like a story and more like watching someone play a game with cheat codes.
Because the character never faces real problems, there’s no growth, and the story doesn’t feel meaningful. It’s hard to connect or care when nothing is ever at risk.
Overall: A story with an invincible main character can be fun at first, but without real challenges, it ends up feeling flat and predictable.
At first, it might seem cool that the main character is lucky, but after a while, it gets boring. There’s no real tension or excitement because you already know they’ll win. It feels less like a story and more like watching someone play a game with cheat codes.
Because the character never faces real problems, there’s no growth, and the story doesn’t feel meaningful. It’s hard to connect or care when nothing is ever at risk.
Overall: A story with an invincible main character can be fun at first, but without real challenges, it ends up feeling flat and predictable.
luck
At first, this story is a lot of fun. It starts off with a great sense of humor and some interesting characters that really pull you in. The beginning had me laughing and excited to see what would happen next. It felt fresh and promising.
But as the story goes on, it starts to lose its charm. The plot becomes repetitive, with the same situations happening over and over again. Instead of moving forward or developing the characters, it just keeps circling back to the same problems or jokes.
What started out as funny and enjoyable turns into something that feels dragged out and a little lazy. It’s like the story ran out of ideas halfway through. By the end, it’s hard to stay interested because nothing really changes.
Overall: A strong and entertaining start, but it doesn’t stick the landing. If it had kept the same energy and brought in new twists, it could’ve been great.
But as the story goes on, it starts to lose its charm. The plot becomes repetitive, with the same situations happening over and over again. Instead of moving forward or developing the characters, it just keeps circling back to the same problems or jokes.
What started out as funny and enjoyable turns into something that feels dragged out and a little lazy. It’s like the story ran out of ideas halfway through. By the end, it’s hard to stay interested because nothing really changes.
Overall: A strong and entertaining start, but it doesn’t stick the landing. If it had kept the same energy and brought in new twists, it could’ve been great.
luck
Ending feels a little abrupt. A few matters not completely resolved. Guessing complexity would increase tremendously and the ability to pass things off would become increasingly impossible, resulting in a story far removed from the current style. A good read nonetheless. But short
TL;DR - The Author is over decriptive and leaves you hanging at key points for no gods damned reason.
I've read until chapter C.379 so far, and frankly I'm losing my patience for this author. His story is well crafted, but his chapters are short, and are main just long, extended descriptions of things. For like 100 chapters the Author set up this first meeting between the MC and his childhood oprressors, and then when he gets to it, he takes 20 chapters to go through maybe the first 10 minutes of the meeting, taking his time describing everything... then suddenly at the end of the chapter, just as the people who were his bullies are called to centerstage, the Author ends the chapter and the next chapter moves time forward by a week! No pay off for the tension he built, no long detailed descriptions of how he was going to let the MC get his revenge. Nope, their names are called, then Chapter ends and in the 14 chapters since then he hasn't even mentioned the MC AT ALL!! 14 chapters that mainly focus on introducing all new charaters we've never met before, meanwhile everyone is left hanging as what happened with this "super important" meet up that had been being set up for half the fuc**** story, that was skipped over, literally, with a time jump of a week! The middle of an arc's climax, and he just skips it! Fu** you Author, just fu** you!
I've read until chapter C.379 so far, and frankly I'm losing my patience for this author. His story is well crafted, but his chapters are short, and are main just long, extended descriptions of things. For like 100 chapters the Author set up this first meeting between the MC and his childhood oprressors, and then when he gets to it, he takes 20 chapters to go through maybe the first 10 minutes of the meeting, taking his time describing everything... then suddenly at the end of the chapter, just as the people who were his bullies are called to centerstage, the Author ends the chapter and the next chapter moves time forward by a week! No pay off for the tension he built, no long detailed descriptions of how he was going to let the MC get his revenge. Nope, their names are called, then Chapter ends and in the 14 chapters since then he hasn't even mentioned the MC AT ALL!! 14 chapters that mainly focus on introducing all new charaters we've never met before, meanwhile everyone is left hanging as what happened with this "super important" meet up that had been being set up for half the fuc**** story, that was skipped over, literally, with a time jump of a week! The middle of an arc's climax, and he just skips it! Fu** you Author, just fu** you!
Such a good story. Up to Chapter 203 so far so I'm caught up at this point and hate that I can't just binge a thousand chapters rn.
Intersting Plot.
Starts at chapter 5
It's so great
Очень приятное чтиво, мне понравилось. Помните, что это яой!
Magnificent 🥰 🤩
Very good just finished binging it all and can't wait for the hiatus to be over, I hope it starts with a time skip
When are the next chapters coming ?
I read this from c. 1 to about c. 867 and I just can't do it anymore.
TLDR: It has stagnated, grown tiresome and has out lived anything resembling a coherent story anymore. It probably should have ended 500 or 600 chapters ago.
To give you a preview:
Starts with a system, that is infrequently used and later implodes and disappears.
No less than 2 complete Timeline rewrites
Constantly, the instant that the MC becomes the top dog, nope just big fish in a small pond.
Slowly but surely the MC's "kids" (None of whom he actually is the father of but he either adopts or recycles previously existing beings into being born by his wives, with all their ancient memories) become more and more the focus
MC has yet to actually even face a true Antagonist in the entire series, all of his "primary" foes get taken care of by others or are simply made irrelivent by the MC becoming incredibly OP. The only time the MC actually fights are with secondary, disposable characters.
Oh, and worst of all, the power scaling is inconsistent. In one chater the MC will be on par with Primordial Gods, the next those Primordials can kick his a**, and 2 chapters later he can easily kick their as***. It has just gone on WAY too long.
TLDR: It has stagnated, grown tiresome and has out lived anything resembling a coherent story anymore. It probably should have ended 500 or 600 chapters ago.
To give you a preview:
Starts with a system, that is infrequently used and later implodes and disappears.
No less than 2 complete Timeline rewrites
Constantly, the instant that the MC becomes the top dog, nope just big fish in a small pond.
Slowly but surely the MC's "kids" (None of whom he actually is the father of but he either adopts or recycles previously existing beings into being born by his wives, with all their ancient memories) become more and more the focus
MC has yet to actually even face a true Antagonist in the entire series, all of his "primary" foes get taken care of by others or are simply made irrelivent by the MC becoming incredibly OP. The only time the MC actually fights are with secondary, disposable characters.
Oh, and worst of all, the power scaling is inconsistent. In one chater the MC will be on par with Primordial Gods, the next those Primordials can kick his a**, and 2 chapters later he can easily kick their as***. It has just gone on WAY too long.
Missing starting g chapters about1200 of them.
Amazing stor
I really love this!
magandaaaaaaaa
Eminence in Shadow?
Good! 👍
Will I ever have a wife?
